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Thursday, 17 March 2016

A day in the life of a shoe

                                                          
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So there I was, waiting for Matthew to come and put me on for a rugby league game. Then he came and put me on. When he came outside I accidentally put my shoe straight into disgusting yucky mud. 


Then the league game started and I got muddy. When we scored, the coach said to Matthew if he wants a kick and he said yes. So he took the kick but he didn't know that I was still muddy. When he was kicking he just remembered that he put me into yucky mud . The ref said hurry up and kick. So he kicked the ball and he missed it. 


After the game, Matthew took me off. But Matthew's dad said there was another game versing the Papanui Tigers. So then Matthew came and put me on and when he went outside. 


He carefully looked to see if there was any mud on the ground and walked around any. Then he went to his last game and when he had the ball it started to rain and the ball slipped out of his hands and he knocked it on. 


We did the scrum I was really muddy and the number 2 came running straight at Matthew and he tackled him right where the legs are and then he dropped the ball. His team mate Jermaine, picked up the ball and he scored a try. The game was over and Papanui won. Home we went, I was really dirty so he took me off and he went to sleep.

2 comments:

  1. awesome i have done this but in a another to yours

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  2. Matthew I like how you have put your writing into paragraphs. Maybe next time do a little bit less writing but apart from that it's fabulous.

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