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Monday, 7 November 2016

Persuasive writing


In my opinion children should be allowed to ride scooters at morning tea and lunchtime because it could make people get of their bottom and do something fun. It could also make you fit when you ride your scooters.

I think this will help people get out and have some fun. Yes they can hurt people.There will be different places where the people ride. On a Friday (we will call that freedom Friday) everyone can bring their scooters on that day.

When you scootering you can have a teacher bond time. Or you can do it with your friends as well. You can do any tricky BUT you need to bring a helmet for safety. There also might be a scooter club so we can teach you how to do some tricks. Who knows. This will also help with quicker transport. So if you're in a rush you can just scooter there and back. So the middles will ride on their block. The juniors will ride on the court and seniors have the rest.



To gain lots of speed they don't need lots of space and like I said there will be a place where they can use their scooter and if someone silly went into a crowd of people with scooters that would be silly because it's a 99% chance that you will get hit and that's the person that ran into the courts fault.

So now do you know why kids and other people are allowed to scooter in schools.

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