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 Begin with a preposition, 
Preposition definition- A word that indicates location or movement,

Example- In,On,At,Under,Over,Between,Below,Against, Within, For, throughout, Near, About, Before, After, Behind, 

Example sentence- After school ended, I went to McDonald's to buy food 
Before Shylock was about to cut a pound of flesh, Antonio said his last words to Bassanio. 

Red, White and Blue Sentence
Use this when you need to give more than one idea on a topic,

Example- The idea of racism is memorable in 'The Merchant Of Venice' because of Shylock, Judaism and Conflict.
The essntials of  rugby are kicking, passing and tackling

The essntials of Basketball are Shooting, Passing and teamwork.
The main rules in Basketball are No travelling, No double dribbling and wear a mouthguard. 

Basic Introduction
Q/R- Quote
Rhetorical Question, 

Rhetorical Question definition- A question that you don't have to answer.

T-Title- 'The Merchant Of Venice'
A-Author- William Shakespeare
K-Key Argument- Use words from the question.What are you arguing. A key moment that shocked the reader was when Antonio agreed to pay a pound of flesh to Shylock if he didn't repay his bond.
O-Outline- The 3 things you are going to write about- Red, White and Blue. He was willing to die for money to give Bassanio,  Shylock and Antonio hate each other, Shylock doesn't show Mercy. 

Example- " If you wrong us, shall we not revenge?". (Shakespeare- Shylock)
'The Merchant of Venice ' a key moment that shocked the reader was when Antonio agreed to forfeit a pound of flesh to Shylock if he didn't repay his bond. This moment was shocking, outrages, fascinating. This moment was important to the text as a whole because Shylock and Antonio didn't like each other but still agreed on the bond, Antonio was willing to risk his life for Bassanio, and Shylock didn't show mercy in claiming his bond.

Basic Body Paragraph x3
P-Point- The moment when Antonio agreed to the bond was shocking because Shylock and Antonio didn't get along.
E-Evidence-Antonio was a merchant and Shylock made a living lending people money with interest. While Shylock charged interest, Antonio lent money without interest and scorned Shylock for doing so. He also spat at Shylock and called him a "Cut throat dog".
E-Explain- Therefore, the reader is shocked to discover Antonio and Shylock can come to an agreement about money lending. It is also shocking because when Shylock calls Antonio out fro the way the treats him, Antonio tells Shylock that he will spit on him and call him a dog again.n This treatment is not usual between people who make agreement.
L-Link- With treatment like this from Antonio towards Shylock, and a promise to be just as cruel in the future, It is shocking that they both agreed to the bond.

Mirror Conclusion- TAKOL



In William Shakespeare 'The Merchant Of Venice' a key moment that shocked the reader was when Antonio agreed to forfeit a pound of flesh to Shylock if he didn't repay his bond. This was shocking because Antonio hated Shylock and promised to mistreat him in the future. Antonio was willing to die for Bassanio even tho he begged him not to take the risk. Finally, because Shylock had never shown mercy and did not at the trial. For these reasons it is clear that this moment was shocking to the reader.